Re: PostgreSQL 15 minor fixes in protocol.sgml

On Tue, Aug 2, 2022 at 4:28 PM Michael Paquier <michael(at)paquier(dot)xyz> wrote:
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> On Mon, Aug 01, 2022 at 11:00:20PM +0300, Ekaterina Kiryanova wrote:
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> > Another point worth mentioning is that only this file contains the phrase
> > "two-phase transaction". I believe that "two-phase commit transaction" or
> > "transaction prepared for two-phase commit" depending on the situation would
> > be better wording.
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> "Prepare for two-phase commit" may be clearer?
>

I think we can use just "Prepared transaction" instead. So, the
message "The user defined GID of the two-phase transaction." can be
changed to "The user defined GID of the prepared transaction.".
Similarly, the message "Identifies the message as a two-phase prepared
transaction message." could be changed to: "Identifies the message as
a prepared transaction message."

> > And finally, could you please clarify this part?
> > -- The end LSN of the prepare transaction.
> > Is it a typo of "prepared transaction"?

I think in this case it should be a "prepared transaction".

Thanks for the report and Thanks Michael for including me. I am just
redirecting it to -hackers so that others involved in this feature
also can share their views.

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With Regards,
Amit Kapila.