Re: strange syntax

On Thu, Jul 16, 2020 at 1:38 PM David G. Johnston <
david(dot)g(dot)johnston(at)gmail(dot)com> wrote:

> On Thu, Jul 16, 2020 at 11:58 AM Laurenz Albe <laurenz(dot)albe(at)cybertec(dot)at>
> wrote:
>
>> On Tue, 2020-07-14 at 21:33 +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
>> > this sentence looks strange:
>> > "Schemas are a purely logical structure and who can access what is
>> managed
>> > by the privilege system"
>> > https://www.postgresql.org/docs/12/manage-ag-overview.html
>> >
>> > especially this part: "who can access what is managed by"
>>
>> It is correct English, but maybe it could be worded better:
>>
>
> Agreed
>
>> "Schemas are a purely logical structure and impose no access restrictions,
>> apart from those defined by the privilege system."
>
>
> But I don't think this is an improvement.
>

I went ahead and reviewed the whole page and came up with a minor rework
patch instead of just a targeted fix.

https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/CAKFQuwacZW-gNLyScFKFxCg_g7QtT7_HQMOyexuV2zUj%3DeQFAw%40mail.gmail.com

David J.