On 30.03.20 19:10, Corey Huinker wrote:
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> On Sun, Mar 29, 2020 at 5:29 AM Jürgen Purtz <juergen(at)purtz(dot)de 
> <mailto:juergen(at)purtz(dot)de>> wrote:
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>     On 27.03.20 21:12, Justin Pryzby wrote:
>     > On Fri, Mar 20, 2020 at 11:32:25PM +0100, Jürgen Purtz wrote:
>     >>>> + <glossterm>Archiver</glossterm>
>     >>> Can you change that to archiver process ?
>     >> I prefer the short term without the addition of 'process' -
>     concerning
>     >> 'Archiver' as well as the other cases. But I'm not an native
>     English
>     >> speaker.
>     > I didn't like it due to lack of context.
>     >
>     > What about "wal archiver" ?
>     >
>     > It occured to me when I read this.
>     >
>     https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/20200327.163007.128069746774242774.horikyota.ntt%40gmail.com
>     >
>     "WAL archiver" is ok for me. In the current documentation we have 2
>     places with "WAL archiver" and 4 with "archiver"-only
>     (high-availability.sgml, monitoring.sgml).
>
>     "backend process" is an exception to the other terms because the
>     standalone term "backend" is sensibly used in diverse situations.
>
>     Kind regards, Jürgen
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>
> I've taken Alvarao's fixes and done my best to incorporate the 
> feedback into a new patch, which Roger's (tech writer) reviewed yesterday.
>
> The changes are too numerous to list, but the highlights are:
>
>     New definitions:
>     * All four ACID terms
>     * Vacuum (split off from Autovacuum)
>     * Tablespace
>     * WAL Archiver (replaces Archiver)
>
>     Changes to existing terms:
>     * Implemented most wording changes recommended by Justin
>     * all remaining links were either made into xrefs or edited out of
>     existence
>
>     * de-tagged most second uses of of a term within a definition
>
>
>     Did not do
>     * Addressed the " Process" suffix suggested by Justin. There isn't
>     consensus on these changes, and I'm neutral on the matter
>     * change the Cast definition. I think it's important to express
>     that a cast has a FROM datatype as well as a TO
>     * anything host/server related as I couldn't see a consensus reached
>
>     Other thoughts:
>     * Trivial definitions that are just see-other-definition are ok
>     with me, as the goal of this glossary is to aid in discovery of
>     term meanings, so knowing that two terms are interchangable is
>     itself helpful
>
>
> It is my hope that this revision represents the final _structural_ 
> change to the glossary. New definitions and edits to existing 
> definitions will, of course, go on forever.
Please find some minor suggestions in the attachment. They are based on 
Corey's last patch 0001-glossary-v4.patch.
Kind regards, Jürgen