Re: Jumbled words

From: Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us>
To: kumarsa(at)gmail(dot)com, pgsql-docs(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Re: Jumbled words
Date: 2021-03-11 00:49:45
Message-ID: 20210311004945.GB11261@momjian.us
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On Thu, Mar 4, 2021 at 03:57:50PM +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
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> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/13/sql-createrole.html
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> "modified by later ALTER ROLE" to be changed to "modified later by ALTER
> ROLE".

I think the existing text is better:

All the attributes specified by <command>CREATE ROLE</command> can be
modified by later <command>ALTER ROLE</command> commands.

The reason "later" is there is to talk about later "ALTER ROLE"
commands, rather than "modified later". The point is that there can be
later "ALTER ROLE" commands to change things.

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