Re: PostgreSQL 12 Press Release - First Draft

From: Erik Rijkers <er(at)xs4all(dot)nl>
To: "Jonathan S(dot) Katz" <jkatz(at)postgresql(dot)org>
Cc: PostgreSQL Advocacy <pgsql-advocacy(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: PostgreSQL 12 Press Release - First Draft
Date: 2019-08-21 21:02:10
Message-ID: b410b1c8555292daaef9feac7d1ce20d@xs4all.nl
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On 2019-08-21 22:43, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> Hi,
>
> Attached is a first draft of the press release for PostgreSQL 12.

A few typos:

'PostgreSQL 12 also improvements the performance of' should be
'PostgreSQL 12 also improves the performance when'

'with blocking any queries' should be (I think)
'without blocking any queries'

'write-head-log' should be
'write-ahead-log'

'that can be computed its value from other columns'
'that can compute its value from other columns'

and something is not quite right about the sentence containing:
'LDAP servers using if it'
but I can't figure out what it should be.

thanks,

Erik Rijkers

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