Re: [very minor] Documentation suggestion

On Fri, Oct 21, 2022 at 02:19:12AM +0000, PG Doc comments form wrote:
> The following documentation comment has been logged on the website:
>
> Page: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html
> Description:
>
> Very minor suggestion. Earlier on this page, commands are referred to that
> can cause "a deadlock". Later on the page, it says "cause deadlock".
>
> https://www.postgresql.org/account/comments/new/15/logicaldecoding-synchronous.html/
>
> "Note that these commands that can cause deadlock"

The full sentence is:

Note that these commands that can cause deadlock apply to not only
explicitly indicated system catalog tables above but also to any other
[user] catalog table.

What I think it means is:

Note that these commands, that can cause deadlock, apply to not only
explicitly indicated system catalog tables above but also to any other
[user] catalog table.

so with "a" it would be:

Note that these commands, that can cause a deadlock, apply to not only
explicitly indicated system catalog tables above but also to any other
[user] catalog table.

but it still needs help ;-) Here is the text I just applied:

Note that these commands can cause deadlocks not only for the system
catalog tables listed above but for other catalog tables.

Attached is the applied patch to master.

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