| From: | Paul Ganainm <paulsnewsgroups(at)hotmail(dot)com> |
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| To: | pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: 7.4 release news item on postgresql.org |
| Date: | 2003-12-05 12:57:18 |
| Message-ID: | MPG.1a3a910420a89b3e9896a7@news.gmane.org |
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merlin(dot)moncure(at)rcsonline(dot)com says...
> > Thanks, but a critique doesn't do us much good if you don't supply
> > alternate
> > text. How about you just re-write the paragraph and I'll post it?
> My pleasure.
> Original:
> Version 7.4 has been released after a long testing period, due to the
> rather large number of new "enterprise" features we have. Click download
> links above to download it, or read more to find out about our new
> features.
> Revised:
> After twelve months of development an extended testing period,
After twelve months of development and an extended testing period,
Note addition an "and".
Paul...
> Merlin
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