pgsql: Doc: clarify wording about tool requirements in sourcerepo.sgml.

From: Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us>
To: pgsql-committers(at)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: pgsql: Doc: clarify wording about tool requirements in sourcerepo.sgml.
Date: 2017-07-10 04:09:14
Message-ID: E1dUQ0Y-0003ka-Ss@gemulon.postgresql.org
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Doc: clarify wording about tool requirements in sourcerepo.sgml.

Original wording had confusingly vague antecedent for "they", so replace
that with a more repetitive but clearer formulation. In passing, make the
link to the installation requirements section more specific. Per gripe
from Martin Mai, though this is not the fix he initially proposed.

Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/CAN_NWRu-cWuNaiXUjV3m4H-riWURuPW=j21bSaLADs6rjjzXgQ@mail.gmail.com

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REL9_6_STABLE

Details
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https://git.postgresql.org/pg/commitdiff/ef68c9f6eb62da53525967ea4a18c593819a2436

Modified Files
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doc/src/sgml/sourcerepo.sgml | 6 +++---
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

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