Re: Postgres 11 release notes

I suggest the following edits for the PostgreSQL beta 2 release
announcement.
I did not provide the edits as a patch because I can't find the source of
/about/news/1867.

- This release contains ... as well as bug fixes that were reported ...
+ This release contains ... as well as fixes for bugs that were reported ...

- we do not advise for you to run
+ we do not advise you to run
or
+ we do not advise running

- CHANGES SINCE BETA 2
+ CHANGES SINCE BETA 1

- There have been many bug fixes for PostgreSQL 11 reported during
- the Beta 1 period and applied to the Beta 2 release. Several bug fixes
- reported for version 10 or earlier that also affected version 11 are
- included in the Beta 2 release.
+ Fixes for many of the bugs reported during the PostgreSQL 11 Beta 1
+ period have been applied to the Beta 2 release. Fixes for several bugs
+ reported for version 10 or earlier that affected version 11 have also
+ been included in the Beta 2 release.
or, if you prefer active voice
+ PostgreSQL 11 Beta 2 contains fixes for many of the bugs that were
+ reported during the Beta 1 period and for several bugs reported
+ for version 10 or earlier that affected version 11.

- ... eliminating a needless additional partition constraint checks ...
+ ... eliminating needless additional partition constraint checks ...

- including returning NULL if slot is not advanced
+ including returning NULL if the slot is not advanced

- Fix returning accurate results with ...
This phrasing makes it sound like you didn't want the accurate results so
you fixed them. :)
Not being familiar with the fix in question, I do not have a suggestion as
to how it should be rephrased.