From: | Dave Page <dpage(at)pgadmin(dot)org> |
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To: | Robert Treat <rob(at)xzilla(dot)net> |
Cc: | PostgreSQL WWW <pgsql-www(at)lists(dot)postgresql(dot)org> |
Subject: | Re: Listing recognised NPOs on the website |
Date: | 2024-12-20 12:10:57 |
Message-ID: | CA+OCxow7S499CMazaapn0+JbLcB57F+HQkbdQ-MCjHmH3mKgHg@mail.gmail.com |
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On Fri, 20 Dec 2024 at 01:46, Robert Treat <rob(at)xzilla(dot)net> wrote:
>
> + and additional non-profit organisations that are critical to the
> PostgreSQL
> + project that you can donate to to help support our work.
>
> ... project. Donations to these organizations are helpful in
> supporting our work.
>
> the use of "to to", while technically correct, is awkward, and really
> the sentence is a bit of a run on, so let's break it up.
>
Done.
>
> +</p>
> +<p>
> + For larger donations, please consider becoming a <a
> + href="/about/financial/">Financial Sponsor</a>.
> +</p>
> +
>
> This bit should probably be removed... I'm not sure what a "larger
> donation" means and I suspect suggesting people become "financial
> sponsors" is likely to confuse people who have been making "larger
> donations" to the existing non-profits for years given this term only
> exists in the context of these few pages.
>
I want to have something in there as we now have the concept of financial
sponsors for NPOs that wish to use it on the site (the main reason for
which is to have a place to put logos as one of the benefits). I'm open to
suggestions for better wording if you have any.
For the EU and US entries, you put the "more information" bit on its
> own line; I think that should be done above as well, since it makes it
> much clearer for scanning purposes.
>
I'm glad you mentioned that, as it caused me to realise I'd formatted the
paragraphs in plain text and had forgotten to add the paragraph tags!
That's fixed now.
Thanks!
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