Wording in pg_upgrade IMPLEMENTATION

From: Daniel Gustafsson <daniel(at)yesql(dot)se>
To: pgsql-docs(at)postgresql(dot)org
Subject: Wording in pg_upgrade IMPLEMENTATION
Date: 2016-10-03 16:20:18
Message-ID: 82D370A3-36DD-490E-A336-6F00E8EB133B@yesql.se
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The following sentence in src/bin/pg_upgrade/IMPLEMENTATION seems to not be
quite right:

"This is the steps ensures that the proper tuples are visible from the new
cluster.”

Patch with proposed wordsmithing is attached.

cheers ./daniel

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