On 8/8/23 11:13 PM, Robert Treat wrote:
> "Users who have skipped one or more update releases may need to run
> additional, post-update steps; "
>
> The comma should be removed.
>
> "please see the release notes for earlier versions for details."
>
> Use of 'for' twice is grammatically incorrect; I am partial to "please
> see the release notes from earlier versions for details." but could
> also see "please see the release notes for earlier versions to get
> details."
Interestingly, I think this language has been unmodified for awhile.
Upon reading it, I agree, and took your suggestions.
Thanks,
Jonathan