Re: Documentation improvement patch

On 25.10.25 21:01, Oleg wrote:
> Dear Daniel,
>
> Thank you for your prompt feedback.
>
> Attached, please find the updated documentation patch, which
> incorporates your suggestions from both the first and second rounds of
> review.

<term><literal>ALTER_REPLICATION_SLOT</literal> <replaceable
class="parameter">slot_name</replaceable> ( <replaceable
class="parameter">option</replaceable> [, ...] )
<indexterm><primary>ALTER_REPLICATION_SLOT</primary></indexterm>
</term>
<listitem>
<para>
- Change the definition of a replication slot.
+ Changes the definition of a replication slot.

I think these are intentionally written in imperative style. Compare
the synopses of the main SQL commands: "change the definition of a
domain" etc.

- First, define a <literal>PgStat_KindInfo</literal> that includes all
+ First, define <literal>PgStat_KindInfo</literal> that includes all

I think this change is incorrect. You are being asked to define an
instance of PgStat_KindInfo, not PgStat_KindInfo itself (which already
exists).

The remaining changes look ok to me.