Re: 2022-08-11 release announcement draft

On 8/8/22 12:44 PM, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> On Mon, Aug 08, 2022 at 11:50:16AM -0400, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
>> * Fix [`pg_upgrade`](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/pgupgrade.html) to
>> detect non-upgradable usages of functions accepting `anyarray` parameters.
>
> use or usage

This line comes directly from the release notes and appears to be
correct as is.

>> and regressions before the general availability of PostgreSQL 15. As
>> this is a beta release , changes to database behaviors, feature details,
>
> Extraneous space before comma

Fixed.

>> APIs are still possible. Your feedback and testing will help determine the final
>
> and APIs

Fixed.

>> tweaks on the new features, so please test in the near future. The quality of
>
> remove "new" before features ?

I believe this is personal preference. I would like to leave in "new" as
we are releasing new features in PostgreSQL 15.

Thanks,

Jonathan