Re: Feedback on 9.0 release text? Please?

>> Thanks to the contributions of developers and companies around the
>> world, such as NTT Open Source, EnterpriseDB, 2ndQuadrant, Red Hat and
>> many others, development and <<<adoption momentum/HUH?>>> is greater
>> than ever.
>
>Yeah, I had trouble with the phrasing there and could use some help.
>What I really wanted to say is that our project momentum, both for
>developing features and for user adoption, is higher/faster than ever.

Using your words, you could replace 'development and adoption momentum' with 'user adoption and development momentum' leading to:

Thanks to the contributions of developers and companies around the world, such as NTT Open Source, EnterpriseDB, 2ndQuadrant, Red Hat and many others, user adoption and development momentum is greater than ever.

Regards,
Evan Bennett
ABSC Group Pty Ltd

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