| From: | Ned Lilly <ned(at)nedscape(dot)com> |
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| To: | Rob Napier <rob(at)doitonce(dot)net(dot)au> |
| Cc: | PostgreSQL Advocacy <pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org>, Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com> |
| Subject: | Re: New flyer, please correct |
| Date: | 2009-02-17 14:11:07 |
| Message-ID: | 499AC57B.7040705@nedscape.com |
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On 2/17/2009 6:52 AM Rob Napier wrote:
> 4. The expression '-- not some company' didn't do it for me. I'd drop that.
> A lot of the people you are targeting work for some company.
Agree with Rob that this wording jumps out. Maybe:
Our worldwide community of hundreds of contributors in dozens of countries develops, runs, promotes, and controls PostgreSQL -- no one company controls the project.
Otherwise, I think it looks great! One minor style suggestion, since we're all designer wannabes: maybe turn off full justification in the grey boxes, leave it left-justified like the others.
Cheers,
Ned
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Ned Lilly
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