Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release

You likely want to keep this release terse, but as far as this new
feature, you may wish to consider snipping a bit from the example at

http://code.google.com/soc/pgsql/appinfo.html?csaid=34B13296DE039A78

"PostgreSQL is privileged to lead .... blablabla An example of its
power.... blabbla".

Pretty big feature and a small sample could drive home that importance
to those who suspect an algorithm to be a new dance step.

Lukas Kahwe Smith wrote:

> Josh Berkus schrieb:
>
>> Folks,
>>
>> .... is in Press CVS:
>> http://pgfoundry.org/scm/?group_id=1000047
>>
>> or in Docs for those of you who don't have CVS access to the Press
>> project:
>> http://pgfoundry.org/docman/view.php/1000047/233/first_draft.txt
>>
>> Your contributions to making it a good release are very appreciated.
>> Please read the notes at the top of the draft *before* commenting.
>>
>> Particularly, I'm looking for help on the best quotes for the
>> release. Bruce, you willing to own something like the quote I
>> attribute to you? If so, how would you re-write it?
>
>
> "PostgreSQL is also the first database to offer and early
> implementation this radically new join algorithm valuable for data
> mining and consolidation."
>
> this sentence is bumpy .. "and" => "an" "this" => "of this"
>
> not sure if its common to address readers with "you" in press releases.
>
> regards,
> Lukas
>
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