Re: a flyer and a poster

Stefan Schumacher wrote:

> After doing some advocacy stuff for NetBSD I thought it might be a good
> idea to do so for PostgreSQL too.
>
> I created a A4 flyer and a A1 poster with LaTeX (in english), the sources
> and the compiled PDF-files can be found at [1].
> Both are still marked as draft and should be reviewed by someone with
> more knowledge of PostgreSQL and english, though I took most of the
> content from postgresql.org. The poster uses two pictures, the big elephant
> logo and a screenshot of psql(1), if someone has a better picture than the
> 2nd, please mail it to mee.
>
> Since the poster still is a draft, both pictures are currently high
> compressed and of low quality, this will be fixed in the final
> version, of course.
>
>
>
> [1] http://www-e.uni-magdeburg.de/steschum/psql/
>
> Please keep me CC'd, i'm not subscribed

I have two suggestions:

The wording:

"PostgreSQL runs on all modern Unix-like operating systems and with 8.0
even on NT based Windows Systems."

The "even on" might raise an eyebrow or two, at least if you're new to
Postgres. Most databases that I know of run on Windows and there's
nothing special about that. Perhaps you could write:

"PostgreSQL 8.0 runs on all modern Unix-like, and Windows (NT-based)
Operating Systems."

You mention "Client programming languages and interfaces" but not
"Server programming languages". IMO, the ability to use a variety of
languages (psql, perl, tcl, java, C, ...), for your triggers and
functions is a great feature.

Regards,

Thomas Hallgren