Re: 2023-11-09 release announcement draft

On Mon, Nov 06, 2023 at 05:04:25PM -0500, Jonathan S. Katz wrote:
> The PostgreSQL Global Development Group has released an update to all supported
> versions of PostgreSQL, including 16.1, 15.5, 14.10, 13.13, 12.17, and 11.22
> This release fixes over 55 bugs reported over the last several months.
>
> This release includes fixes for indexes where in certain cases, we advise
> reindexing. Please see the "Update" section for more details.

s/"Update" section/"Updating" section/ or change section title below.

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> This is the **final release of PostgreSQL 11**. PostgreSQL 10 will no longer
> receive
> [security and bug fixes](https://www.postgresql.org/support/versioning/).
> If you are running PostgreSQL 10 in a production environment, we suggest that
> you make plans to upgrade.

... to here. They're redundant with "PostgreSQL 11 EOL Notice" below:

> For the full list of changes, please review the
> [release notes](https://www.postgresql.org/docs/release/).
>
> PostgreSQL 11 EOL Notice
> ------------------------
>
> **This is the final release of PostgreSQL 11**. PostgreSQL 11 is now end-of-life
> and will no longer receive security and bug fixes. If you are
> running PostgreSQL 11 in a production environment, we suggest that you make
> plans to upgrade to a newer, supported version of PostgreSQL. Please see our
> [versioning policy](https://www.postgresql.org/support/versioning/) for more
> information.