Re: PG 13 release notes, first draft

On Mon, Sep 07, 2020 at 08:40:26AM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:

Rebasing onto 3965de54e718600a4703233936e56a3202caf73f, I'm left with:

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
index 8fffc6fe0a..69d143e10c 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro(at)postgresql(dot)org>
</para>

<programlisting>
-SELECT round(sum(<replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable> / n::float)) FROM generate_series(1, <replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable>) s(n);
+SELECT round(sum(<replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable> / n::float)) AS newvalue FROM generate_series(1, <replaceable>OLDVALUE</replaceable>) s(n);
</programlisting>
</listitem>

@@ -776,8 +776,8 @@ Author: Noah Misch <noah(at)leadboat(dot)com>
-->

<para>
- Allow skipping of <acronym>WAL</acronym> for <link
- linkend="guc-full-page-writes">full table writes</link> if <xref
+ Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> writes to be skipped during a transaction
+ which creates or rewrites a relation if <xref
linkend="guc-wal-level"/> is <literal>minimal</literal> (Kyotaro
Horiguchi)
</para>
@@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael(at)paquier(dot)xyz>

<para>
Add <structfield>leader_pid</structfield> to <xref
- linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker ownership
+ linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker's leader process
(Julien Rouhaud)
</para>
</listitem>
@@ -1262,8 +1262,8 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter(at)eisentraut(dot)org>
-->

<para>
- Enable <link linkend="client-authentication">Unix-domain sockets</link>
- support on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
+ Enable support for <link linkend="client-authentication">Unix-domain sockets</link>
+ on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
</para>
</listitem>

@@ -1391,8 +1391,8 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii(at)postgresql(dot)org>
-->

<para>
- Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> recovery to continue even if invalid
- pages are referenced (Fujii Masao)
+ Allow recovery to continue even if invalid
+ pages are referenced by <acronym>WAL</acronym> (Fujii Masao)
</para>

<para>