Re: doc review for v13

On Thu, Apr 09, 2020 at 10:01:51PM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> On Fri, Apr 10, 2020 at 11:27:46AM +0900, Michael Paquier wrote:
>> required pages to remove both downlink and rightlink are already locked. That
>> -evades potential right to left page locking order, which could deadlock with
>> +avoid potential right to left page locking order, which could deadlock with
>> Not sure which one is better, but the new change is grammatically
>> incorrect.
>
> "Evades" usually means to act to avoid detection by the government. Like tax
> evasion.

This change is from Alexander Korotkov as of 32ca32d, so I am adding
him in CC to get his opinion.

>> <varname>auto_explain.log_settings</varname> controls whether information
>> - about modified configuration options are printed when execution plan is logged.
>> - Only options affecting query planning with value different from the built-in
>> + about modified configuration options is printed when an execution plan is logged.
>> + Only those options which affect query planning and whose value differs from its built-in
>> Depends on how you read the sentence, but here is seemt to me that
>> "statistics" is the correct subject, no?
>
> Statistics ?

Oops. I may have messed up with a different part of the patch set.
Your suggestion is right as the subject is "information" here.
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Michael