|From:||Michael Paquier <michael(at)paquier(dot)xyz>|
|To:||Justin Pryzby <pryzby(at)telsasoft(dot)com>|
|Cc:||Alvaro Herrera <alvherre(at)2ndquadrant(dot)com>, Andres Freund <andres(at)anarazel(dot)de>, pgsql-hackers(at)postgresql(dot)org|
|Subject:||Re: clean up docs for v12|
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On Fri, Apr 26, 2019 at 09:56:47PM -0500, Justin Pryzby wrote:
> But here's some one-liner excerpts.
> - is <literal>2</literal> bits and maximum is <literal>4095</literal>. Parameters for
> + is <literal>2</literal> bits and the maximum is <literal>4095</literal>. Parameters for
> Adding "the" makes it a complete sentence and not a fragment.
Not sure here either that it matters.
> - all autovacuum actions. Minus-one (the default) disables logging
> + all autovacuum actions. <literal>-1</literal> (the default) disables logging
> There's nothing else that says "minus-one" anywhere else on that page. I just
> found one in auto-explain.sgml, which I changed.
That's one of these I am not sure about.
> - than 16KB; <function>gss_wrap_size_limit()</function> should be used by the
> + than 16kB; <function>gss_wrap_size_limit()</function> should be used by the
> Every other use in documentation has a lowercase "kay", and PG itself doesn't
> accept "KB" unit suffix.
Right. There are more places like that, particularly in the comments
of the code.
> - A few features included in the C99 standard are, at this time, not be
> + A few features included in the C99 standard are, at this time, not
> permitted to be used in core <productname>PostgreSQL</productname>
> Indisputably wrong ?
Yep, this one is wrong as-is.
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