> On Mon, Nov 5, 2018 at 3:20 AM Tatsuo Ishii <ishii(at)sraoss(dot)co(dot)jp> wrote:
>
>> Hi Jonathan,
>>
>> > Hi Tatsuo,
>> >
>> > On 10/19/18 9:07 PM, Tatsuo Ishii wrote:
>> >> Hi Jonathan,
>> >>
>> >>>> Given the nature of the content and that we may have a few more
>> >>>> translations come in, we might want to set up a system to have someone
>> >>>> independently review the translations as well and sign off on them.
>> >>>>
>> >>>> Thoughts on that?
>> >>>
>> >>> All sounds good to me.
>> >>
>> >> Attached is the Japanese translation of CoC. The translation was done
>> >> by a professional translator and then reviewed by community relation
>> >> team (I am one of the members) of PostgreSQL Enterprise Consortium
>> >> (PGECons [1]). The cost of the translation was supported by PGECONS.
>> >
>> > Thank you again for working on this and having the translation
>> > independently reviewed. I have attached a patch I propose for the
>> > website. Please let me know if there are any mistakes with how I
>> > converted it into HTML.
>> >
>> > This patch includes the "infrastructure" needed to add other
>> > translations of the CoC, so hopefully others will also submit
>> > translations that we can include :)
>> >
>> > Once this is signed off on, I will commit to the website.
>> >
>> > Thanks,
>> >
>> > Jonathan
>>
>> Thanks for the editorial for HTML.
>>
>> Here are subtle changes I would like to have:
>>
>> (1)
>> <p><em>Last updated: 最終更新日: 2018年8月18日</em></p>
>>
>> "Last updated:" is not necessary because "最終更新日:" is same in
>> Japanese and it's redundant.
>>
>
> I would suggest mayne including something like "最終更新日 (Last updated):" , to
> make it clear lto the casual observer who doesn't know Japanese that this
> is what it means as well.
+1.
That makes sense.
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Tatsuo Ishii
SRA OSS, Inc. Japan
English: http://www.sraoss.co.jp/index_en.php
Japanese:http://www.sraoss.co.jp