Re: EXCLUDE COLLATE in CREATE/ALTER TABLE document

shihao zhong wrote:

> Thanks for your comments, a new version is attached.

In this hunk:

@@ -1097,8 +1097,8 @@ WITH ( MODULUS <replaceable
class="parameter">numeric_literal</replaceable>, REM
method <replaceable>index_method</replaceable>.
The operators are required to be commutative.
Each <replaceable class="parameter">exclude_element</replaceable>
- can optionally specify an operator class and/or ordering options;
- these are described fully under
+ can optionally specify any of the following: a collation, a
+ operator class, or ordering options; these are described fully under
<xref linkend="sql-createindex"/>.
</para>

"a" should be "an" as it's followed by "operator class".

Also the use of "and/or" in the previous version conveys the fact
that operator class and ordering options are not mutually
exclusive. But when using "any of the following" in the new text,
doesn't it loose that meaning?

In case it does, I would suggest the attached diff.

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