From: | Lukas Kahwe Smith <smith(at)pooteeweet(dot)org> |
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To: | Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com> |
Subject: | Re: First Draft of 8.2 Release |
Date: | 2006-08-30 17:25:37 |
Message-ID: | 44F5CA11.7090108@pooteeweet.org |
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Josh Berkus schrieb:
> Folks,
>
> .... is in Press CVS:
> http://pgfoundry.org/scm/?group_id=1000047
>
> or in Docs for those of you who don't have CVS access to the Press project:
> http://pgfoundry.org/docman/view.php/1000047/233/first_draft.txt
>
> Your contributions to making it a good release are very appreciated.
> Please read the notes at the top of the draft *before* commenting.
>
> Particularly, I'm looking for help on the best quotes for the release.
> Bruce, you willing to own something like the quote I attribute to you? If
> so, how would you re-write it?
"PostgreSQL is also the first database to offer and early implementation
this radically new join algorithm valuable for data mining and
consolidation."
this sentence is bumpy .. "and" => "an" "this" => "of this"
not sure if its common to address readers with "you" in press releases.
regards,
Lukas
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