Re: [COMMITTERS] pgsql: Copy-editing for contrib/pg_visibility documentation.

From: Thomas Munro <thomas(dot)munro(at)enterprisedb(dot)com>
To: Robert Haas <robertmhaas(at)gmail(dot)com>
Cc: Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us>, "pgsql-hackers(at)postgresql(dot)org" <pgsql-hackers(at)postgresql(dot)org>
Subject: Re: [COMMITTERS] pgsql: Copy-editing for contrib/pg_visibility documentation.
Date: 2016-10-03 01:00:29
Message-ID: CAEepm=0=VFjCcRRSBf9BFyAhME0vJBJQgoc9EvhEYLBd84xCLA@mail.gmail.com
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On Mon, Oct 3, 2016 at 1:36 PM, Robert Haas <robertmhaas(at)gmail(dot)com> wrote:
> On Sat, Oct 1, 2016 at 3:33 PM, Tom Lane <tgl(at)sss(dot)pgh(dot)pa(dot)us> wrote:
>> Copy-editing for contrib/pg_visibility documentation.
>>
>> Add omitted names for some function parameters.
>> Fix some minor grammatical issues.
>
> Why do you keep insisting on changing case where I've written "which"
> to instead say "that" in situations where AFAIK either is perfectly
> correct? I find such changes at best neutral, and in some cases
> worse.

'Which' looks OK to me too here, but I speak some kind of British
English, and it looks like at least some writers of formal American
English prefer 'that' here:

* http://www.chicagomanualofstyle.org/qanda/data/faq/topics/Whichvs.That.html?old=Whichvs.That01.html
* https://en.oxforddictionaries.com/usage/that-or-which

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Thomas Munro
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