| From: | Robert Haas <robertmhaas(at)gmail(dot)com> |
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| To: | Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us> |
| Cc: | PostgreSQL-development <pgsql-hackers(at)postgresql(dot)org>, Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein(at)yahoo(dot)com> |
| Subject: | Re: libpq documentation cleanups (repost 3) |
| Date: | 2011-01-12 17:04:40 |
| Message-ID: | AANLkTi=KS+8ojW7RSTvrmRMeMzoREcxrspyXtaiKCnzZ@mail.gmail.com |
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On Wed, Jan 12, 2011 at 11:53 AM, Bruce Momjian <bruce(at)momjian(dot)us> wrote:
> The attached patch is a collection of libpq documentation cleanups
> recommended in a list of changes emailed to me by Leslie S Satenstein.
>
> Leslie found a number of places our libpq documentation that were unclear
> or awkward, and this diff generated by me attempts to address them.
>
> I have already updated the documentation proofreading wiki:
>
> http://wiki.postgresql.org/wiki/Documentation_Proofreading
I don't think changing "see below" to "refer below" or "call" to
"execute" is an improvement; even if we did that uniformly throughout
our documentation, surely future editors are going to reuse those
phrasings.
A lot of these other changes look pretty dubious too, although some
seem worthwhile.
--
Robert Haas
EnterpriseDB: http://www.enterprisedb.com
The Enterprise PostgreSQL Company
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