Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com> wrote on 22.09.2004, 01:30:44:
> Here's my synthesis for the final draft of the press release. In order to
> get some of the quotes I want, it has to be more-or-less finished by THURSDAY
> NIGHT. So please give your feedback on what version of the text to use or
> any changes you want to see.
>
Looks good to me. Let's go with your new paragraphs all the way.
Expertly polished version of (the other) Josh's already fine efforts.
Best Regards, Simon Riggs