Re: Final Copy Edit: Press Release, Page

On Mon, Nov 08, 2004 at 05:23:57PM -0800, Josh Berkus wrote:
> Folks,
>
> I'd like to have one or two people look over the PR stuff one last time now
> that it's all together. Here's what I'm wanting:
>

Other people already caught the typos I saw. I find this pretty
strange, though: "PostgreSQL is the collective work of hundreds of
developers, building on almost twenty years of development dating
back to the University of California at Berkeley."

UC Berkeley is not a date, so nothing could date back to it. I'd
suggest "almost twenty years of development, which started at the
University of California at Berkeley" or something like that. It's
still awkward, though. Anyone got something better?

A

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