| From: | Peter Eisentraut <peter_e(at)gmx(dot)net> |
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| To: | Josh Berkus <josh(at)agliodbs(dot)com> |
| Cc: | pgsql-docs(at)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: Runtime Basics |
| Date: | 2003-10-31 23:13:30 |
| Message-ID: | Pine.LNX.4.44.0311010007150.1528-100000@peter.localdomain |
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Josh Berkus writes:
> > Please send a context diff (diff -c).
>
> Attached.
The SGML is not valid. Please validate it.
"Parameter" is the correct term, not "option".
"runtime" is spelled "run time".
There is no such thing as INITDB. Maybe you mean initdb.
Please follow the existing indentation scheme. Never put tabs in a
documentation source file.
Mark up parameter names using <varname>.
Don't use quotes ("), use <quote>.
And finally, can you explain what you intend to accomplish by this change?
I just see a bunch of things moved around and some things changed along
the way. Some of these things seem to make sense, but some do not.
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Peter Eisentraut peter_e(at)gmx(dot)net
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