| From: | "Marc G(dot) Fournier" <scrappy(at)postgresql(dot)org> |
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| To: | Greg Sabino Mullane <greg(at)turnstep(dot)com> |
| Cc: | pgsql-advocacy(at)postgresql(dot)org |
| Subject: | Re: 8.0 Press Release, Draft Two |
| Date: | 2004-08-29 23:10:08 |
| Message-ID: | 20040829200848.C763@ganymede.hub.org |
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On Sun, 29 Aug 2004, Greg Sabino Mullane wrote:
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> My critique of this version:
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>> August 24, 2004 - The PostgreSQL Global Development group today announced
>> the availability of the landmark 8.0 version of the PostgreSQL ORDBMS.
>> PostgreSQL, created in 1986 by UC Berkeley, is the most advanced open
>> source database in existence today. Version 8 is the collective work of
>> over 200 developers.
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> "Hundreds" sounds better than 200. Too many numbers in the paragraph already.
Ya, I liked the 'hundreds' vs '200' ... 200 sounds too "finite" ...
> We might want to mention our firendly license somewhere in here.
"non-ambigous licensing" might be something to point out ...
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