From f055864aa80ba6ba78df859ad7a7208b091a3e6a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
Date: Sun, 19 Jul 2026 21:47:07 +0200
Subject: [PATCH v1] Use whole sentences in the tutorial

In an enumeration in the tutorial, the individual items start with
sentence fragments that end with a period.  This confused at least one
reader, so let's use whole sentences in this place.

Report: William R. Pursell <william.r.pursell@gmail.com>
Author: Laurenz Albe <laurenz.albe@cybertec.at>
Discussion: https://postgr.es/m/178433358027.824456.16086075130836422432%40wrigleys.postgresql.org
---
 doc/src/sgml/start.sgml | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/start.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/start.sgml
index 0263a700591..23935a0649e 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/start.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/start.sgml
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
     <itemizedlist>
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       A server process, which manages the database files, accepts
+       First, there is a server process, which manages the database files, accepts
        connections to the database from client applications, and
        performs database actions on behalf of the clients.  The
        database server program is called
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 
      <listitem>
       <para>
-       The user's client (frontend) application that wants to perform
+       Second, there is the user's client (frontend) application that wants to perform
        database operations.  Client applications can be very diverse
        in nature:  a client could be a text-oriented tool, a graphical
        application, a web server that accesses the database to
-- 
2.55.0

