From 3f45433193d8fd3e2110df23e56a2ce31d232243 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Justin Pryzby <pryzbyj@telsasoft.com>
Date: Sun, 6 Sep 2020 22:10:11 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] fixes release notes

---
 doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml | 38 +++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
index e27b044408..f4cc65178a 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/release-13.sgml
@@ -731,8 +731,8 @@ Author: Noah Misch <noah@leadboat.com>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Allow skipping of <acronym>WAL</acronym> for <link
-        linkend="guc-full-page-writes">full table writes</link> if <xref
+        Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> writes to be skipped during a transaction
+        which creates or rewrites a relations if <xref
         linkend="guc-wal-level"/> is <literal>minimal</literal> (Kyotaro
         Horiguchi)
        </para>
@@ -753,8 +753,8 @@ Author: Peter Eisentraut <peter@eisentraut.org>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Enable <link linkend="client-authentication">Unix-domain sockets</link>
-        support on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
+        Enable support for <link linkend="client-authentication">Unix-domain sockets</link>
+        on Windows (Peter Eisentraut)
        </para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -765,7 +765,7 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Improve the performance when replaying <link
+        Improve performance when replaying <link
         linkend="sql-dropdatabase"><command>DROP DATABASE</command></link>
         commands when many tablespaces are in use (Fujii Masao)
        </para>
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@ Author: Tomas Vondra <tomas.vondra@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
        <para>
-        Allow a sample of statements to be logged (Adrien Nayrat)
+        Allow logging a sample of statements (Adrien Nayrat)
        </para>
 
        <para>
@@ -1000,7 +1000,7 @@ Author: Michael Paquier <michael@paquier.xyz>
 
        <para>
         Add <structfield>leader_pid</structfield> to <xref
-        linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker ownership
+        linkend="pg-stat-activity-view"/> to report parallel worker's leader process
         (Julien Rouhaud)
        </para>
       </listitem>
@@ -1285,7 +1285,7 @@ Author: Alvaro Herrera <alvherre@alvh.no-ip.org>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> receivers use a temporary replication slot
+       Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> receivers to use a temporary replication slot
        if a permanent one is not specified (Peter Eisentraut, Sergei Kornilov)
       </para>
 
@@ -1369,8 +1369,8 @@ Author: Fujii Masao <fujii@postgresql.org>
 -->
 
       <para>
-       Allow <acronym>WAL</acronym> recovery to continue even if invalid
-       pages are referenced (Fujii Masao)
+       Allow recovery to continue even if invalid
+       pages are referenced by <acronym>WAL</acronym> (Fujii Masao)
       </para>
 
       <para>
@@ -1689,15 +1689,14 @@ Author: Andrew Dunstan <andrew@dunslane.net>
 
       <para>
        Add alternate version of <link
-       linkend="functions-json-processing-table"><function>jsonb_setI()</function></link>
+       linkend="functions-json-processing-table"><function>jsonb_set()</function></link>
        with special <literal>NULL</literal> handling (Andrew Dunstan)
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       The new function, <function>jsonb_set_lax()</function>, allows null
-       new values to either set the specified key to <acronym>JSON</acronym>
-       null, delete the key, raise exception, or ignore the operation.
-       IS 'return_target' CLEAR?
+       The new function, <function>jsonb_set_lax()</function>, allows new
+       null values to either set the specified key to <acronym>JSON</acronym>
+       null, delete the key, raise an exception, or ignore the operation.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
@@ -1863,8 +1862,8 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
       <para>
        Add function <link
        linkend="functions-math-func-table"><function>min_scale()</function></link>
-       that returns the number of digits to the right the decimal point
-       that is required to represent the numeric value with full precision
+       that returns the number of digits to the right of the decimal point
+       that are required to represent the numeric value with full precision
        (Pavel Stehule)
       </para>
      </listitem>
@@ -1913,8 +1912,7 @@ Author: Thomas Munro <tmunro@postgresql.org>
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       The old function names were kept for backward compatibility.  DO WE
-       HAVE NEW NAMES?
+       The old functions were kept for backward compatibility.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
@@ -2833,7 +2831,7 @@ Author: Tom Lane <tgl@sss.pgh.pa.us>
       </para>
 
       <para>
-       This improves performance for queries that access many object.
+       This improves performance for queries that access many objects.
        The internal List <acronym>API</acronym> has also been improved.
       </para>
      </listitem>
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