--- release.sgml.orig	2004-07-28 00:01:22.620329079 -0400
+++ release.sgml	2004-07-28 00:04:15.712796036 -0400
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@
       <para>
        Server configuration parameters SortMem and VacuumMem have been
        renamed to work_mem and maintenance_work_mem to better reflect
-       their use. The original names still supported.
+       their use. The original names are still supported.
       </para>
      </listitem>
 
@@ -775,7 +775,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
      <para>
-      Allowing composite types as table columns (Tom)
+      Allow composite types as table columns (Tom)
      </para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@
       Allow ALTER DATABASE ... OWNER (Euler Taveira de Oliveira)
      </para>
      <para>
-      Previously this required modifying the system tables.
+      Previously, this required modifying the system tables.
      </para>
     </listitem>
 
@@ -857,7 +857,7 @@
     <listitem>
      <para>
       Add pg_get_serial_sequence() to return the serial columns
-      sequence name(Christopher Kings-Lynne)
+      sequence name (Christopher Kings-Lynne)
      </para>
      <para>
       This allows automated scripts to reliabily find the serial
@@ -875,7 +875,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
      <para>
-      Warn of primary/foreign key mismatch requires costly lookup
+      Warn that primary/foreign key mismatch requires costly lookup.
    </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
@@ -1011,7 +1011,7 @@
 
     <listitem>
      <para>
-      Warn of empty string being passes to oid/float4/float8 data types; 7.6
+      Warn of empty string being passed to oid/float4/float8 data types; 7.6
       will throw an error instead (Neil)
      </para>
     </listitem>